Installment V – The Manufacture of Labor and Class Separation in Bleak House

Installment five of Bleak House, published in July of 1852, spans chapters fourteen through sixteen of the Charles Dickens novel.  After Richard leaves to begin studying medicine under Mr. Badger, readers are introduced to Caddy Jellyby’s secret fiancé Prince Turveydrop.  Discussion of Prince’s father, old Mr. Turveydrop, dominates this portion of chapter fourteen and the man’s defining attribute – his Deportment – gives the chapter its name.  Ada, Esther, and Mr. Jarndyce’s visit to Miss Flite’s house follows, during which Miss Flite explains that Mr. Kenge has been sending her money every week, a sum which she believes the Lord Chancellor is forwarding.  In this same visit, Mr. Woodcourt is more fully introduced after namelessly appearing in previous chapters and Krook reveals that he is attempting to teach himself to read and write. Chapter fifteen, “Bell Yard,” centers on Skimpole’s dead debt collector (called either “Neckett” or “Coavinses”) and the Neckett family.  After Skimpole laughingly tells Ada, Esther, and Jarndyce of the man’s death, the four of them go to his home and find that his thirteen-year-old daughter Charley has been working alone to take care of her two younger siblings. Mr. Gridley, the family’s downstairs neighbor, then talks at length about his frustrations with the court.  “Tom-all-Alone’s,” the installment’s final chapter, briefly discusses Sir Leicester’s contraction of gout (which has historically plagued the Dedlocks) and focuses mainly on Lady Dedlock’s (who is unidentified at this point) inquiries into Nemo’s death and the disposal of his remains, assisted by Jo.

This installment, like the novel as a whole, is heavily concerned with class and how characters navigate that system.  The travels of Ada, Esther, and Jarndyce throughout chapters fourteen and fifteen say very little directly about them as characters but instead use them as observers of the world’s inhabitants, whose varying demeanors and places of residence mark them with corresponding class distinctions.  As old Mr. Turveydrop’s Deportment stands in contrast to Mr. Gridley’s self-described impoliteness in the installment’s first two chapters, so does Chesney Wold stand as a staple of the affluent Dedlock estate in contrast to the dilapidated conditions of Tom-all-Alone’s, which Lady Dedlock ventures into in the installment’s final chapter.  However, although the people and places which the novel’s main characters encounter take center stage in this installment, other characters (including the novel’s main characters) are still being explored via their relationships to those seen here. Issues of labor and space are central in examining characters in this context.

When Skimpole, after seeing the home and family of Coavinses, exclaims “I was the great patron of Coavinses, and his little comforts were my work” (254, “work” emphasis mine, “my” original), it should alert readers to the strangeness of Skimpole’s understanding of labor.  Having heard Skimpole happily declare his aversion to genuine work in previous chapters, we see him here taking credit for “enabling” Neckett to raise his children.  This is, of course, ridiculous. Yet, even in cases that are seemingly more normal, Dickens is regularly writing in Bleak House about characters who are rarely in danger of facing material hardship should they not labor.  Mr. Gridley, speaking to Mr. Jarndyce about their differing court cases (Jarndyce’s involving thousands of pounds, Gridley’s involving hundreds), asks “Is mine less hard to bear, or is it harder to bear, when my whole living was in it, and has been thus shamefully sucked away?” (251).  Do we ever see the main characters face similar stakes? Richard’s career indecision – among the most important plot issues in the installments surrounding this one – provides an illustrative example.  

Richard contemplates pursuing medicine, law-work, and spends a brief period in the army before eventually becoming engrossed in Jarndyce and Jarndyce.  There does seem to be some concern about finances for him, especially when others address the foolishness of Richard’s faith that the Jarndyce and Jarndyce suit will make Ada and him rich, however, the more urgent concern during this section of the book seems to be what his lack of passion for any career says about Richard’s character, as Mr. Jarndyce worries.  The performance of labor is not important to Richard because his circumstances demand him to work but because duty is framed as socially favorable and personally enriching. Similarly, it is significant that Richard finally devotes himself to Jarndyce and Jarndyce, a case that has failed to produce anything for years, but one that has also kept many working.  The issue of this work producing nothing and having little direct benefit for others muddles the validity and righteousness of any supposed duties and instead marks the work as more self-serving. Like the mental gymnastics that Mr. Skimpole performs to assert his role in raising Neckett’s children, the manufacture of labor and its appearance seems just as important as any work completed or not completed.

This is certainly the case with Mrs. Jellyby and Mrs. Pardiggle, both of whom spending most of their time doing work that is superficially humanitarian.  When Mr. Kenge explains that Mrs. Jellyby is “devoted to the subject of Africa; with a view to the general cultivation of the coffee berry – and the natives – and the happy settlement… of our superabundant home population” (49, emphasis original), it is impossible not to notice that she’s involved in the British colonialist project that had crafted narratives such as “the white man’s burden,” which donned the appearance of duty but belied the project’s main goals of imperialist expansion.  Likewise, Mrs. Pardiggle declares her fondness of work when she visits the brickmaker’s house in chapter eight, but the brickmaker petitions her, “I wants a end of these liberties took with my place” (132), highlighting the falseness of her supposedly altruistic work.

The importance of appearance makes these characters comparable to those who carry the patina of old money.  Old Mr. Turveydrop’s Deportment is specifically oriented around his inaction; he “did nothing whatever, but stand before the fire, a model of Deportment” (226).  Equally inactive are Chesney Wold and the Dedlock family shelters, as the Dedlocks’ “greatness seems to consist in their never having done anything to distinguish themselves, for seven hundred years” (110).  Notably, both the Dedlocks and Turveydrop are threatened by a “levelling.” The Dedlock family gout confronts them with “the levelling process of dying” (255) and Turveydrop says that “a levelling age is not favourable to Deportment” (228).

However the affluence of these characters is manifested, readers are repeatedly confronted with the separation between them and the novel’s poor.  Beyond some of the examples already discussed within the novel’s events, this separation is also created in their narration. The book’s omniscient narrator ponders how “It must be a strange state to be like Jo” (257).  Where the Esther and those around her seem like class tourists of sorts, the omniscient narrator is the same in the virtual travels of their watching eye. The role that space plays in establishing class in Bleak House is undeniable.  Esther’s experiences at both the brickmaker’s house and at Neckett’s support this.  While at the brickmaker’s, Esther describes an imaginary “iron barrier” (133) between herself and the family.  Meanwhile, though much of what Mr. Gridley says in his monologue during the Bell Yard visit could speak to this issue, his explanation of how he has “lost the habit of treading upon velvet” and that this marks him as an outsider to the Court of Chancery are illustrative of how the places people exist in further ingrain class distinctions.  For a character like Mr. Skimpole, who has no money of his own but is always around people who can pay his debts, we can see just how much a character’s surroundings can determine their social standing.

Although the novel may paint such a vivid picture of the operations of class within its world, it is nevertheless difficult to parse out how sympathetic Dickens and his writing actually are to the poor characters in the novel.  When Esther says that “what the poor are to the poor is little known, excepting to themselves and GOD” (135), is this simply bringing attention to Esther’s subjectivity or is it Dickens conceding a gap in the scope of his otherwise sprawling novel?  Even if it is the latter, does the rest of the book forgive this gap?

There are definitely portions of the book that would make this forgiveness difficult to grant.  For example, if we take Mrs. Jellyby to be a satire of British colonialism, then a late note about the “King of Borrioboola wanting to sell everybody… for rum” (987) seems like a cheap joke that tries to play both sides.  And what of the helpless attitude of pity that the book’s narrators adopt when examining the most awful of circumstances, such as when the omniscient narrator laments the way the deteriorated of Tom-all-Alone’s molds those living there and yet fatalistically compares Jo’s prospects to those of animals (259)?  In his monologue about his frustrations with the court, Mr. Gridley positions himself as the victim of either individuals or the system, venting about this confusing dialectic (251). Perhaps Dickens locates his answer to these issues in individuals, mocking many throughout the novel, and eventually ending it with the romantic pairing of Esther and Woodcourt, both of whom we see care for the weak and helpless.  Yet Bleak House is also about systems, the specificity of this assemblage of individuals.  Muddled in Dickens’ conclusions is the system and, in turn, also those stuck within it.

Perspectively Questioning Bleak House

Perspectively Questioning Bleak House

ENG491H Spring 2020 – Installment IX

In the working notes of Dickens for Bleak House, he uses question marks to note that he hasn’t decided whether to include characters yet or not. However, for the number that I worked with – number nine – he did this for all but one set of the characters he considered. This made me think more thoroughly about how he does this process and consider what goes into it. For some characters, he did include them, while with others he just included characters that would reference them instead. Otherwise, he didn’t include them at all. This plays strongly into the way he manipulates the reader’s point of view by obscuring their ability to see the whole picture – they only get a limited viewpoint into the whole story, unlike his omniscient point of view he uses in contrast to the other characters like Esther. The characters he does introduce, however, are essential for that number.

For this installment, Dickens uses the Smallweeds to introduce who the unknown character is and provide a link between Esther and the unknown character. He also spends time with Tulkinghorn, who is connected to Hortense – a character who was considered for this number but wasn’t directly included. Mr. Guppy starts to connect Lady Dedlock to Esther as well, which twists the readers’ perspective as they come to grips with why they look so similar.

The ways that connections are used in the introductions and interactions are essential to a work like Bleak House. Additionally, another character questioned, Hortense wasn’t mentioned or added, but the connected character, Tulkinghorn, was discussed for two chapters of the number I worked with. The relationship is still built up without the “French woman”, and she can be introduced much later in the serial work than he first considered. However, even through characters that weren’t brought up in the ninth release of Bleak House, the working notes are inherent reminders of connections between them – Dickens never separates connected characters from each other when he makes his lists of connected characters, only listing characters right after each other or together because they are related to each other.

This helps give insight on what the thought process for the working notes followed: it may have been assumed to “jog memory”, but it also helped keep down all the connections between the characters that Dickens could forget to include if he didn’t write it down. I also noticed an aspect that told me the order of which the working notes was written – the left side is filled out first, and then the right side is filled in with details. I noticed this because of his note of including “Mrs. Rouncewell’s other son, or Watt, or Rosa”. On the right side of the page where he organises where he will talk about it between the chapters, he changes the phrasing to “and” instead of “or” – he has decided to include them all, not choose between them. This helps with understanding the use of question marks – rather than idly not caring, it gives more leeway for certain ways of things being described and how to go about showing the event.

He has a certain way things fold out in the novel, but some things don’t have to be told in an exact order. Since there is more freedom to work with the characters in a way that flows more openly, Dickens uses that freedom to manipulate his readers’ understanding. Particularly, he uses the omniscient narrator to tell this whole number – a choice that prevents connection with a particular character that may make certain details difficult to contain. This choice, along with the characters he included and focused on for the whole number, were due to the place in the novel he had gotten to. The exact timing of details being told weren’t quite essential, yet he had to make those decisions precisely, and make them in a way that brought out the connections best.

There is a deep level of care put into how characters are introduced, interacted with, and manipulated in the reader’s point of view. As I noted in the previous paragraph, Dickens mainly makes notes of the connections, though he leaves tips for himself about how those connections occur if they are complex – such as Lady Dedlock finding that Esther is her child. It’s possible to jump into the way that he may have viewed his writing process – a full story already present, with the choice of perspective all his. If he had chosen to write from another perspective than the omniscient narrator, surely he would have chosen Lady Dedlock – this would alter the course of that chapter, and perhaps provide spoilers to the end of the chapter rather than postponing it to the end, which was the end of the whole release to be published for that number.

This installment working notes gave a lot to work with abstractly – mostly on Dickens’ way of using the notes. The notes had the headers written in first for sure, but the notes themselves were first for characters on the left page and more specific notes on the right page as he presumably wrote Bleak House and did other things. The character notes were most intriguing to me, as they provided the most insight to this process in my installment. They were the focus of the installment, as character connections were made, and details of characters were fleshed out as well. In the way it was presented, it still maintained a sense of the unknown perspective that was necessary to carry through the whole novel.

Richard’s Role in Connecting Narratives Within the Eighth Installment

The working notes for the eighth installment of Charles Dickens’ Bleak House are unique in that, aside from those of the first installment, they are the only ones which contain no notes on the left-hand side of the page. Dickens used the right side of the page to plan out the installment’s chapter contents, whereas the left side typically contained memos on characters or plot points he considered connecting. This installment, like the rest, builds on earlier installments and sets events in motion for later ones. Since it does not stand alone, Dickens had plenty of opportunity to play around with and muse on what would be best to include. The only clue that the working notes for this installment offer as to why the left-hand side may have been left blank, is the inclusion of the triple underlining of “Richard” in two separate places. This is significant because Dickens seldom used a triple underline within his working notes for this novel, and this is the only page of working notes in which there are two instances of a triple underline on the right hand side of the page. This creates a visual link between the two instances — one under the first chapter “Esther’s Narrative” and one under the second chapter “An Appeal Case” — and also provides a clue that Richard plays an important role in understanding the installment as a whole. It is possible that Dickens felt strongly about this link and didn’t feel the need to muse over other potential options. Richard’s role within this installment can therefore be used as a case study on the interconnections within a single installment, while also providing insight on how Dickens expands outward to connect to other installments and the novel as a whole.

The eighth installment, released in October of 1852, marks a clear shift in Richard’s character arc, ultimately foreshadowing his death and cementing his fate. In this installment, Esther visits Chancery for the first time with Richard, who feels he will only be able to settle once the case is settled and no longer has a grip on him. He decides to step away from pursuing law and instead sets his sights on the army. Mr. Jarndyce then deems it necessary for Ada and Richard to call off their engagement for the time being. This installment also contains Caddy and Prince announcing their engagement to their parents, Charley becoming Esther’s maid, Gridley’s death, and Mrs. Snagsby’s jealousy and incorrect suspicion that Mr. Snagsby is Jo’s father.

If the left-hand side of his working notes were used to form connections, then perhaps their absence in this installment suggests Dickens felt there was already a strong link between the narratives of these chapters. It is evident that the connections within these three chapters are plentiful, such as the juxtaposition of Caddy and Prince announcing their engagement to their parents and Mr. Jarndyce forcing Ada and Richard to end their engagement. The strongest connection however seems to be between Richard and Gridley, as Gridley’s death foreshadows Richard’s own. Narratively, Gridley’s death serves the purpose of representing the effect an obsession with the court’s outcomes can have on someone. The connection only becomes fully apparent in the final installment when Richard ultimately meets the same end. However, it is also hinted at when Esther draws a connection between Richard and Miss. Flite in the first chapter of this instalment: “But he never thought—never, my poor, dear, sanguine Richard, capable of so much happiness then, and with such better things before him!—what a fatal link was riveting between his fresh youth and her faded age” (369). This connection is particularly interesting because Esther is looking back from a future point, alluding to the fact that Richard was capable of happiness at that time, and therefore suggesting that there will come a point where he is no longer capable. This link is further evident in Dickens working note which reads “the shadow of Miss Flite on Richard,” referring to the last lines of the second chapter of this installment:

“The sun was down, the light had gradually stolen from the roof, and the shadow had crept upward. But, to me, the shadow that pair, one living and one dead, fell heavier on Richard’s departure, than the darkness of the darkest night. And through Richard’s farewell words I heard it echoed: ‘Of all my old associations, of all my old pursuits and hopes, of all the living and the dead world, this one poor soul alone comes natural to me, and I am fit for. There is a tie of many suffering years between us two, and it is the only tie I ever had on earth that Chancery has not broken!'” (405-406).

This section serves a few key purposes. Its main purpose is to draw parallels between Gridley and Richard, by having some of Gridley’s last words playing in Esther’s head as Richard leaves for the army. Although the text points to it being the shadow of the pair, Flite and Gridley that is, Dickens’ working note says that it is “the shadow of Miss Flite is on Richard.” The working note therefore lends to the reading that the real shadow is that of Ada on Richard, because of a parallel drawn between the two pairs. Miss Flite and Gridley’s friendship arose from their similar circumstance in the court, whereas Ada and Richard were also drawn together by both being wards in the Jarndyce and Jarndyce case. However, the events of this installment have torn them apart for the time being and forced them to end their engagement. This passage also serves to foreshadow Richard’s death even further, since in the end Ada and Richard will too be left “one living and one dead.” Through this connection, therefore, the eighth installment already contains strong parallels and foreshadowing. Perhaps this came clearly to Dickens without having to employ the use of the left-hand side of his working notes.

While it is easier to link the first two chapters of this installment, both being told from Esther’s perspective, there are more subtle links to the third chapter which is told from the third person narration. The final two lines of this chapter are: “And into whatsoever atmosphere of secrecy his own shadow may pass, let all concerned in the secrecy beware! For the watchful Mrs Snagsby is there too ⁠— bone of his bone, flesh of his flesh, shadow of his shadow” (416). This passage, taken literally, serves to show that Mrs. Snagsby has witnessed Mr. Snagsby’s interaction with Jo. However, since they are the last lines of the installment, its role should also be considered to the installment as a whole. The mention of shadows here connects back to the shadows at the end of the previous chapter, showing that the narratives of all the characters in Bleak House are all connected in one way or another. The actions of one cannot escape the shadow of another. It also serves as a reminder that there are truly no secrets within the pages of this novel.

Due to the serial nature of Bleak House, it was important for Dickens to think ahead and plan out ways to form connections. As with the other installments, this one sets up events for future installments. Dickens uses the oxymoron of “downward progress” in his working notes next to Richard’s name. This oxymoron is particularly interesting because it suggests that although he is progressing, moving forward, his actions are truly forcing him downward. He is digging himself deeper and deeper into a hole, cementing his fate. Set to the right of “downward progress” in Dickens working notes are the notes “Jarndyce and Jarndyce” and “the army.” It seems unlikely that Dickens would have needed to remind himself of the court case, since it is central to the novel’s plot. Instead their placement suggests that these are what set off Richard’s downward progress, as they ultimately result in his called off engagement and cause a rift between him and Mr. Jarndyce. Esther “observed, with great regard, that from this hour he never was as free and open with Mr. Jarndyce as he had been before” (391-392). Here Esther is looking back on these events while thinking of what will come in the future. The shift in Richard in this installment is a major turning point and will ultimately set the tone for his character the remainder of the novel.

It is clear that Dickens carefully and expertly formed narrative links within the chapters of individual installments of Bleak House, as well as between separate installments and the novel as a whole. In the eighth installment this can be seen through the way Richard is linked to Miss Flite within these chapters, while his link to Gridley only becomes entirely clear in the last installment through their parallel deaths. Dickens further uses devices such as Esther’s foreshadowing to hint at events to come. Although there are no memos in the left-hand side of his working notes for the eighth installment which might offer insight as to what connections he considered making, Dickens has used Richard as the main character from which to draw connections to.

 

The Sixth Installment: The True Beginning of Bleak House?

Introduction

Charles Dickens’s Bleak House tells a complex and drawn-out narrative that stitches itself together through its publication in monthly installments. The sixth installment of Bleak House stands out for many reasons within the narrative, but many of those can be summarized into one phrase: it acts as a real beginning. Up to this point, Dickens had been giving his readers the traditional introduction to characters and their dynamics, but the sixth installment is where the plot truly begins to reveal itself. Throughout this installment, the reader is given the first concrete starting points of Richard’s declining character, Esther and Mr. Woodcourt’s romance, Lady Dedlock and Esther’s connection, Hortense’s anger, Jo’s struggles, and Mr. Guppy’s investigations just to name a few. The sixth installment of Bleak House is significant within the entirety of the narrative because it acts as the true beginning to many of the plot lines that define and characterize the novel. 

Summary of Installment 

This installment was published in August of 1852. It consists of chapters 17-19, entitled Esther’s Narrative, Lady Dedlock, and Moving On, respectively. In the chapter “Esther’s Narrative,” the scene opens on a visit between the Bleak House residents (Ada, Esther, and Mr. Jarndyce) and Mr. and Mrs. Badger — Mr. Badger being the doctor who agreed to take Richard on as an apprentice. They all speculate about Richard’s true feelings on the medical profession and if he is fit for it. Later, when Richard talks on that same subject with Esther and Ada, the readers see that he himself knows he’s not suited to it and he decides to change to a career in law. Mr. Jarndyce allows it, but warns Richard to be careful not to make that kind of mistake again. Later, Mr. Allan Woodcourt and his mother visit Bleak House before his departure from the country. Mr. Woodcourt secretly leaves flowers for Esther after his mother has left.  

In “Lady Dedlock,” the narrative begins with a time skip and the Bleak House residents, and Mr. Skimpole, traveling to visit Mr. Boythorn in Lincolnshire. During their visit, in the little church where all the neighbors gather, Esther and Lady Dedlock lock eyes for the first time. Esther’s left strangely distraught, but another week passes before they meet again, having both taken refuge from a rainstorm in the same lodge. After the storm, Lady Dedlock leaves Hortense behind to walk home in the rain.

In “Moving On,” Dickens takes his readers back to London during the summer, when the court is on vacation. This part of the narrative focuses on the Snagsby’s and Chadband’s dinner together that is interrupted by a policeman bringing Jo, who is under arrest, to Snagsby’s care since he refuses to “move on.” Jo laments his situation, Mr. Chadband tries to give him a sermon and fails, and the chapter ends with Jo looking up at the cross of St. Paul’s cathedral. 

Beginnings within “Esther’s Narrative”

Richard’s Declining Character 

Even the working notes for this installment begin with noting the introduction of Richard’s unreliability. The image provided is a modern representation of the working notes. The first two questions that Dickens asks himself in regard to this installment center around introducing and developing Richard’s character. This ‘introduction of his unreliability’ plays a significant part to the rest of Richard’s life in Bleak House. This acts as the beginning to his many career changes, careless money habits, obsession with Jarndyce and Jarndyce, and eventual tragic death. In turn, his unreliable character affects not only his life, but Ada’s as well — he leaves behind a wife and child, all because of the series of events that stems directly from this chapter within the narrative. 

Esther and Mr. Woodcourt’s Romance

Up to this point, Esther had no interest in romantic relationships, as evidenced by her refusal of Mr. Guppy’s proposal. Yet this chapter is where Dickens chooses to introduce Esther’s budding romance with Mr. Woodcourt, as evidenced by the working notes for the sixth installment, as shown here. They don’t even have a conversation or anything of the sort — Mr. Woodcourt simply leaves behind a bouquet of flowers that have an unmistakable romantic intention. This is to set up Esther’s eventual happy ending. This setting up of Esther’s happy ending is noted elsewhere in the working notes, in the spread for the tenth installment regarding Esther’s illness. As far back as the sixth installment, Dickens was setting up the victory conditions for Esther in the narrative of Bleak House, and that in itself is significant to the narrative as a whole. 

 

Beginnings within “Lady Dedlock”

Lady Dedlock and Esther

Dickens had planned the connection between Lady Dedlock and Esther since the first installment, as evidenced by the working notes for that installment. However, the sixth installment is where they first have any sort of significant interaction. Dickens himself noted that this was the beginning of something major by simply underlining both their names three times in the working notes for this installment. This is important to note, given that throughout Dickens’s working notes he rarely underlines things more than twice. Within the finished narrative, this initial meeting sets up the possibility of a connection between the two through Esther’s distress at seeing her and the similarities that are noticed between them by other characters. Lady Dedlock and Esther’s connection is one of the biggest mysteries of the first half of Bleak House, and it is their connection that leads Esther on the wild chase with Mr. Bucket after Lady Dedlock’s secret is revealed as well as Lady Dedlock to her demise.

The Characterization of Hortense

In this installment, the readers finally find out the name of the Frenchwoman who has been seen in the company of Lady Dedlock: Hortense. With Lady Dedlock leaving her behind at the lodge after the rainstorm, the readers get to see how Hortense reacts to having her pride injured. The significance of introducing her passionate and dangerous tendencies leads Dickens to leave the image of her walking home barefoot through rain-soaked grass as the final image of this chapter — as something the readers need to hold onto in their minds. Dickens introduces the beginning of her grudge against Lady Dedlock, which comes into play later with Hortense’s attempt to frame Lady Dedlock for the murder of Mr. Tulkinghorn. 

Beginnings within “Moving On”

Jo’s Struggles

It is in this installment that Jo becomes a recurring character in Bleak House, due to his part in leading the disguised Lady Dedlock on a tour of the locations that concerned Nemo, her long lost love. Dickens includes Jo breaking down on Mr. Snagsby’s doorstep over his station in life, saying, “I’ve always been a moving and a moving on, ever since I was born. Where can I possibly move to, sir…” (308). This struggle with Jo not having a place in the world leads to his eventual connection with Esther and him infecting her with his illness, as well as his eventual death surrounded by kind strangers. This initial introduction of his struggle introduces the rest of his character arc within the narrative.

Mr. Guppy’s Investigation

In this installment, we see the interest that Mr. Guppy is taking in regards to Lady Dedlock as well as Esther’s parentage. Dickens noted that Mr. Guppy would be an important character to carry though this installment in the working notes. Dickens does not specify any further than “yes,” but Mr. Guppy is the one who questions Jo when the policeman drops him off at Snagsby’s. This is significant in that it is the beginning of Mr. Guppy’s investigation which reveals, at least to the reader, the connection between Lady Dedlock and Esther. 

Conclusion

After the characters are introduced and the scene is set, the plot can take the starring role in the narrative — to many readers, that point where the plot takes precedent is the point in which they become invested in the narrative and what it has to say. Therefore, it can be argued that the sixth installment of Bleak House can be seen as the true beginning of the meaningful narratives within the novel since it introduces the main motivations or connections between characters in a way that isn’t evident upon first introducing them. 

Bleak House Part 18: A Beginning to the End

Serial storytelling is a practice that has been popular since the 19th century and has only grown into its multidimensional medium with the development of television, books, and video games. Many early writers have been credited with beginning the art of serial novels, but none more famous than Charles Dickens. Dickens wrote dozens of serial novels; however, one of his most well-known serials is the novel Bleak House, which is split into twenty monthly parts. The central focus of this story is a never-ending court case that connects a variety of different people through various mysteries, secrets, and plots. While these mysteries carry the story and build up a very interesting and odd set of characters, they do eventually have to be solved as the story wraps up, and Dickens begins the process of wrapping up in part eighteen. There are many important, heavy moments, including Lady Dedlock’s death and Sir Leicester’s immediate decline in health. Section eighteen also serves to connect strings between unlikely characters like Jenny and Lady Dedlock. While the piece itself is often considered a standalone section that’s part of Dickens overall serial, it is more important to consider it as part of a whole novel and see how this section affects the whole piece. Section eighteen brings every character together to finish the final plot, and through Dickens’ working notes, the audience can see the focus he places on characters, pacing, and weather to create moods and themes throughout the novel.

One of the defining features of Dickens’ Bleak House is how character-driven it is from beginning to end. Within the first few chapters, the audience is introduced to an array of people from the kind-hearted Esther to the mysterious Nemo to the depressed Lady Dedlock. When it comes to characters, Dickens never shortchanges his audience, and he always manages to account for every person throughout the novel. Based on his working notes for part eighteen, Dickens recognizes this abundance of characters because half of the notes are focused on said persons. With notes such as “Mr Bucket and Esther. Snagsby’s and Guster? Yes. Mr Boythorn? No…”, it’s obvious that Dickens was working through exactly how to approach the final 100 pages of his novel. He recognized that he needed to start wrapping up character arcs, and he used his notes to work through when to handle each group, and based on the roles of Esther, Mr Bucket, and the Snagsbys in this part, he has begun to do just that. This is most prominent with the Snagsbys. Throughout the story, the miscommunication experienced between husband and wife is almost comical as Mr. Snagsby works to help and understand poor Jo’s role in the investigation while Mrs. Snagsby is convinced her husband is cheating on her and has a secret lovechild. The whole plot is absolutely ridiculous, but Dickens seems to consider it an important enough point that he works to complete it. By chapter 59, it is finally resolved by Mr. Bucket who explains how, “[Mr. Snagsby] with no more knowledge of it than your great grandfather, was mixed up (by Mr. Tulkinghorn deceased, his best customer) in the same business, and no other… And yet a married woman, possessing your attractions, shuts her eyes (and sparklers too), and goes and runs her delicate-formed head against a wall.” (P. 908) In one short conversation, Dickens solves this silly side plot in one conversation with Mr. Bucket, who has taken it upon himself to fix every issue in the book. However, it’s not how the scene is handled that is important. It’s the fact that Dickens chooses to handle it at all. He could have very well just left that alone and let the audience believe that this strand of distrust lasted forevermore in their relationship. But Dickens does solve this issue, and that just goes to show how important his characters were to the greater plot of the story. Every character in the story, whether they’re a main character like Esther or a less recognized one like Mr. Boythorn, is important to the overarching plot. This story was written as a social satire, and every character plays their role. The Snagsbys stand for the obsessive nature of women meddling in the lives of their husbands, and Dickens does his best to convey this. Every part of section eighteen connects to the overall plot, and by drawing up conclusions for at least some of his dozens of characters signals that the story is coming to an end and the overall plot is finally being fully addressed and understood.

Another important facet of this novel is the use of suspense and pacing. For most of the novel, Dickens approaches the story in a very slow manner, taking the time to introduce every individual character and setting. For the first half, the readers are slowly emerged into a universe that readers in the 1800s are familiar with because it’s meant to imitate real life. He takes a long time to finally piece together the little plot points of the story from Nemo’s death to Esther’s family. However, considering this story was released in monthly parts, it seems even slower. Dickens is doing just enough to keep his readers interested, but it isn’t until the last quarter of the book that the plot really picks up, especially in part eighteen when the hunt for Lady Dedlock hits its peak. The working notes lays out everything that Dickens wants to include from “Explain it at the last” to “Guster causes delay…” to very specific details about the weather during the hunt. The notes themselves are very short and kind of frantic in the same way that the actual chapters are; however, what is most interesting is the direct contrast in his notes between the insertion of a quick chapter at Chesney Wold and the phrase “Carry on suspense” that is written at the top of that chapter’s notes from Dickens. Inserting this scene seems to be the opposite of carrying the suspense; however, on closer examination, the chapter does a lot to build tension in a more covert way. One of the lines that stands out is a line from Sir Leicester Dedlock, when he says, “‘Let it be known to them, as I make it known to you, that being of sound mind, memory, and understanding, I revoke no disposition I have made in her favor. I abridge nothing I have ever bestowed upon her. I am on unaltered terms with her…” (P. 895) This moment is a perfect example of subtle suspense because it raises the stakes on finding Lady Dedlock. Knowing that Sir Leicester is willing to take her back with no qualms if she returns to him, suddenly, this hunt is more about bringing Lady Dedlock to her senses than catching her to charge her with any actual complaints. It’s a confusing moment because the audience is left to think about whether they want her to be caught or not, and then, when they’re thrown back into the fray of the search, they want to find her just to know what will happen. Even though he cuts the tension with a little flash of a much quieter scene, the quiet only increases the suspense and the need to read on. This pacing is what makes this novel such a good serial read. Dickens reveals just the right amount of information even in his slower parts, and it’s just enough to keep the readers invested in everything that’s going on. This incredibly fast closing of the story complements the very slow beginning and middle. It makes the audience feel involved in the plot because the slowest parts feel like living any normal day, but those few quick parts are just enough to add novel value to a story all about the whims of the rich and how it affects those that aren’t rich. Dickens seems to recognize this need for a quicker pace, and he even spends time trying to figure out when and how he should include certain information. When it comes to quick reveals, he considers when to mention that Lady Dedlock and Jenny switched clothes when he writes “Explain it at the last” in his notes. He knew that discussing it too early would kill the suspense, so he waits until the very last moment, on page 915, when Mr. Bucket tells Esther they changed clothes at the cottage. It’s an important revelation, but he doesn’t stay on it for long, and instead, he moves on immediately to Lady Dedlock’s death. This novel is meant to catch the reader’s attention, and its sections like part eighteen that does just that, dragging them in right when they might be losing some sort of interest in the end. He is pacing just right by switching into full gear with hit after hit of action in these final sections.

Scenery is something else that lends itself to the pacing of this story. Dickens always takes the time to lay out exactly where his story is taking place whether it be paragraphs upon paragraph describing the fog, like he does in chapter one, or the use of exact street names. The first chapter in part eighteen is all about the scenery, and Dickens mentions actual details and quotes in his working notes that he wants included. Phrases like “Journey through the snow.” and “Thaw coming on-” are both good examples, and while the chapter is focused on action and it seems odd to note down scenery details, the scenery actually lends itself to the action here. On page 880, Esther mentions that “Although it was extremely cold, the snow was but partially frozen, and it churned — with a sound as if it were a bench of small shells — under the hoofs of the horses, into mire and water.” This little detail seems to describe the search as a whole: it’s hopeless, and they keep slipping around and missing their target, but with the melting snow (the thaw mentioned in Dickens’ notes), there is the promise of better and warmer times to come. The details tell a lot by saying a little which is something Dickens does throughout this novel. The little nods towards weather–be rain during a time of sadness or a foggy day to show mystery– allow the audience to understand the tone of different sections. While this story is meant to be a satire, it also does more than just make fun of the lives of the rich. It faces the ideas of death and longing and madness all in a very serious way, and Dickens does a good job at signaling to the reader when it’s time to laugh and when it’s time to contemplate what he’s trying to say. This section deals with humor and seriousness all in one go, and the use of weather and urgency really conveys this point and allows the audience to react properly.

While it’s impossible to ask Dickens what he was trying to say in each of his novels, his working notes do it for him, in a way. They’re a chance to see his writing and thinking processes while also offering little hints about what’s to come or where ideas connect. Bleak House’s working notes are filled with all kinds of thoughts and plans, and section eighteen in particular lays the brickwork for a beginning to the end. From direct quotes to characters, Dickens puts thought into everything when writing each section, and it’s through these notes that the audience can make the connections between individual sections and the whole novel. Serial fiction is about smaller parts creating a bigger whole, and nobody does it quite like Dickens who takes the smallest detail and makes it a motif for the entire thing, and it’s his notes that let us spot this. It’s his notes that build these connections and, ultimately, connect the book within itself.